"To An Absence" by Brian Brodeur

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Content Warning: Abortion, dead fetuses
Mea culpa: Ugh, I should've said "volta italiana." What a philistine I am.

Topics discussed in this episode include:
-Lake View Cemetery and the Haserot Angel

-Getting called out from beyond the grave

-Come see me read!

-Brian Brodeur!

-My Great-Uncle, Elton Glaser

-Buy Brian's latest book: Some Problems With Autobiography

-Wins and almost-wins in The Kim Bridgford Memorial Sonnet Contest.

-Yet more ways to make formal poems sound contemporary

-The art of rhymes that don't rhyme

-Another hybrid sonnet?

-The triumphant return of the pyrrhic-spondee.

-When Facebook stalking is part of podcast research

-Radford's Meat Market is real.

-The dark truth by which we see

-The haunting of Brian Brodeur

-Is guilt itself a crime?

-Displacement Activity

-Verbal dentistry

-How joy is deepened by suffering

-A dripping bag of redemption
Text of poem:
To An Absence
The kid in latex gloves at Radford’s beef

brown-bags my five-pound brisket, saying, “Dude,

have a blessed day.” I do the math—you’d be

a teenager, his age. Across the counter,

the brisket drips (the kid grinning, “My bad”),

but all I feel for you is gratitude

for the life your death allowed—my wife and daughter

I’d like one day to see I might deserve.

And would deserve, I think, if I could live

without the guilt I tongue like a decayed

incisor I’ve refused to have removed—

afraid what joy I’ve known might disappear

without a counter-pain to root it here.

The kid says, “Wait,” and stamps my brisket PAID.

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The landscape of Ohioan poetry (Jeremy): Poetry Spotlight
Supported in part by The Ohio Poetry Association
Art by David Anthony Klug
List of the most common metrical feet:
Iamb: weak-STRONG (u /)
Trochee: STRONG-weak (/ u)
Anapest: weak-weak-STRONG (u u /)
Amphibrach: weak-STRONG-weak (u / u)
Dactyl: STRONG-weak-weak (/ u u)
Cretic: STRONG-weak-STRONG (/ u /)
Pyrrhic: weak-weak (u u)
Spondee: STRONG-STRONG (/ /)